The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain

Soldiers thank the Lord
And make their announcement new
Rhythm in blues time
 
Caimanson said:
But just in twelve bars
The prisoner stared the sky
And said where are you Lulu?
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Sorry but this violates the 575 rule taught to me so well by wil when I came on the board. 1st line the last line of the previous post, 5 syllables. Second line, 7 syllables allowed. 3rd line only 5 syllables allowed again

Try again. It's easy once you get the hang of it.

flow....;)
 
Where are you Lulu?
Diamond Lucy love thing
Smiles sunbeams through cloud



Caimanson, hope you don't mind, Haiku now able to flow.............
- c -
 
flowperson said:
Sorry but this violates the 575 rule taught to me so well by wil when I came on the board. 1st line the last line of the previous post, 5 syllables. Second line, 7 syllables allowed. 3rd line only 5 syllables allowed again

Try again. It's easy once you get the hang of it.

flow....;)
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FORGIVENESS!:eek: (I knew I couldn't have been that easy....)

CIEL, you are more than welcome.
 
Ummm... the second line needs seven syllables. I suggest...

Makes computers go
Do they really "always" Flow
Oh those flat things there

Again, also thanks to wil for the assistance. He helped me at the start.

flow....:)
 
Celestial sphere

More than only syllables

Blessings all around

(I had trouble, too, Caimanson:))
 
Leave it for an hour

The bird is brown and lovely

Applause for the chef!

:) :):) :) :)
 
Mmmm .....double post..... cant edit, so............



Caught me unawares
In syllable syllabub
soak smoothie supeme
 
Ciel said:
Mmmm .....double post..... cant edit, so............



Caught me unawares
In syllable syllabub
soak smoothie supeme
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The alliteration, oh the alliteration.
 
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