The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain

look with better eyes

lift what we held to the light

and love each other


(OOPS! edited to add:))

<OR>


look with better eyes

look with the eyes that don't see

amazing vision


(amazing vision...haiku can flow again...)
 
The truth can blind you

In order to help you see

What you have not seen
 
(Hi wil! The idea is a great one;) ...umm...but ya gotta take the last line of the person before you and go with it. Just trying to avoid a haikuist revolt:))

InPeace,
InLove
 
What you have not seen

will bring us all to rejoice

and love each other

(lol oops, left my browser open didn't check the time, thought I was not only correct but correcting....uno mas)
 
namaste elme, glad to see you here...

FYI Pseudo Haiku Chain rules...

take the last line of the last post, and make it your first (the chain)

each line has a defined number of syllables...

First- five syllables

Second - Seven syllables

Third line - five syllables...

then someone will take your third line and make it their first...

Me, I gotta jump back in order...

back to the future
we find past contemplations
materialized
 
elme said:
gosh, im sorry guys .... my setting was on hybrid mode and this totally threw me ..... back to good 'ol fashioned linear mode... now i can even see my own posts!
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That's ok elme im sure you are not the first and surely not the last person to make a mistake in here..LOL....Which brings me to a thread I might start called "CR's Bloopers.

:)
Now, onto >>>The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain (echo)
 
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