The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread

[seattlegal]

It started out as:

Pseudo Haiku = the only structure rule is they must be 3 lines of 5-7-5 syllables per line...topic can be anything of your choice.

The Chain= you must begin your pseudo-haiku using the last line of the poem before as the first line in your's.

I have seen these haiku chains get to 1000+ posts in other groups.

I begin with:

a haiku a day (5 syllables)
will keep the doctor away (7 syllables)
verbal supplement (5 syllables)

you begin with:

verbal supplement

And grew, and grew, and grew to an amazing frame-stretching size after 732 replies, winding up as:

as you lived the lore
a hole in my heart is there
ebb and flow inlove

Today, it is reincarnated as:

ebb and flow in love
dancing throughout the cosmos
resting here and there​

 

[Pathless]

resting here and there
picking up cosmic sparkles
living jewelry

 

[flowperson]

living jewelry
twinkling in the midnight sky
reminds us each day

 

[greymare]

reminds us each day
because INLOVE is the way
to live life today

 

[Joedjr]

to live life today
held in Love and Mercy find
love wisdom and truth

 

[flowperson]

love wisdom and truth
call to spirits in the sky
invoke them humbly

 

[Pathless]

invoke them humbly
rain rain rain shhhh earth so soaked
shhhh sheltering earth

 

[China Cat Sunflower]

shhhh sheltering earth
Come, my lovely mosquito
arms await your kiss

 

[Phyllis Sidhe_Uaine]

Arms await your kiss
Roses perfume quiet air
Chocolate on tongue

Phyllis Sidhe_Uaine

 

[flowperson]

Chocolate on tongue
humid heat in Mexico
helps us bear winter

 

[Jack Halyard]

Helps us bear winter
Till vernal splendor arrives
In all its glory.

 

[Pathless]

in all its glory
days in the wink of a young
girl's eye glory days

 

[wil]

girls eye glory days

envisioning now's expanse

embracing future

 

[flowperson]

embracing future
departing the rust bound past
we all exist right now

 

[Snoopy]

we all exist now
brief wave across the ocean
water never dies

 

[greymare]

water never dies
breathing on the moon and tide
solar lunar love

 

[Pathless]

solar lunar love
volcanoes shuffle surface
storms steam streaming sea

 

[greymare]

storm steam streaming sea
I feel your love sent to me
world wide web of love

 

[Pathless]

world wide web of love
spider's threads, grandma spider
weaves worlds, wondering

 

[Gatekeeper]

weaves worlds, wondering
perfect truth and binding ties
precious hearts unite