The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread

[greymare]

atrium of heart
together in spirit, but
expanse is so wide

 

[Gatekeeper]

expanse is so wide
choking the breath of union
may we find our peace

 

[Pathless]

may we find our peace
and our creativity
rain growing rivers

 

[Ahanu]

Rain growing rivers
quieting chaotic minds
Do you hear the song?

 

[Netti-Netti]

do you hear the song?
a time reborn for a transformed heart
if all the world could see us now

 

[China Cat Sunflower]

Ahem, 5-7-5.

If all the world could see us now...I'd put my pants back on.

Do you hear the song?
dancing shadows, council drums
snow falls on prairie

 

[seattlegal]

snow falls on prairie
spreading a blanket over
tomorrow's flowers

 

[Gatekeeper]

tomorrows flowers
are the weeds of yesterday
blooming from the light

 

[greymare]

blooming from the light
sweethearts hold hands in the light
old faces, young hearts

 

[Gatekeeper]

old faces, young hearts
stand upon a moonlit shore
waves of perfection

 

[Pathless]

waves of perfection
and tired old boredoms dripping
noises on the sea

 

[Jack Halyard]

Noises on the sea,
Neptune's children are singing
Ancient sea shanties.

 

[Pathless]

ancient sea shanties
salt tides water high swamping
fecund moon in sky

 

[Tao_Equus]

fecund moon in sky
sharing moonbeams and dreams
no questions of why

 

[Pathless]

no questions of why
ask why. I drink Sam Adams
Old Fezziwig Ale.

 

[Ahanu]

Old Fezziwig Ale.
ask the wind, wave, bird, or clock,
and they all replied:

 

[Tao_Equus]

and they all replied
in their metaphors and rhymes
and other hidden signs

 

[Dream]

and other hidden signs
visible secret language
'Sheesh!' They replied.

 

[Ahanu]

"Sheesh!" they replied
psychology of ancient
forms. Pay attention.

 

[greymare]

forms. pay attention
in triplicate please madam
save the whales, japan